NaPoWriMo Revisions. Tomorrow II.

Going back to April and looking again at each piece, seeing how it fits. Since they were all written with a very short time scale, finding the idea behind them a month later is interesting, even slippery. The original thought, morphs in to a new idea, or maybe digs deeper to find more of the story than previously shown. Today I have gone with a reduction, and added more repetition, more history perhaps

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A simple line to follow.
A simple line to follow.


We followed barely a memory, a darker line.
We followed because of the future I suppose.
We followed an idea, to chase something,

to go somewhere different from the past.
To chase meaning, a step away on the path,
to follow the sunset and reach the horizon,

we followed to reach out and touch something
that was different, that had history and depth,
we followed because we had nothing else.

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