Punctuation, seems to be optional at the moment. Ideas, opinions, tell me why.
I'm reading your poem the one that you say is personal that only you and I can understand the one you wrote without stops or punctuation because it seems to be all over the net yet how can I tell you where I think this passage starts and the story begins after the epilogue where you explain how before you never understood I was talking about love even in translation when the sun went down and we walked and we spoke a new language without pauses where our words rolled with the sea on the beach where the bonfire reached to the moon as the crowd danced forever and some even swam naked cold blue skin in the light from the first full moon of summer we watched not knowing if we had been invited to such a personal celebration while we celebrated intimacy with words neither of us understood would be the end of us
(Interestingly, proofreading this with WordPress produces no writing errors and neither does OpenOffice.)
We sat watching a thunderstorm develop earlier, after a very hot day. Pictures to follow soon. Keep watching where you are, it’s important to know.